Monday, June 30, 2008

newTitle(ThisTown);

Why come to this steamshitcadillacpissingumbrellaman town?

'Half hour from the metro stands an old haunt
With half emo kids
Half bridled by their parent's ghosts (prostituteskirts and 10dollarchips)

Choose thistown for shineypillars if you must
But oldmarblecarvedmen might even want you to call after 2 years

Fuck you, city

4 comments:

Luke Brewster said...
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Luke Brewster said...

to me, your title being one word is over doing it. it needs to be two words so as not to sicken the reader immediately.

other than that, your device works well and you use it well. you evoke things. good work :).

TheModernCritic said...

Fine, watch this shiznit.

Luke Brewster said...

damn, you hit it :).